That night we were about to kiss

[Sharox]

I'm honestly in awe at how good you are at writing, bravo.

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I have no idea, that's why I'm asking.
Also I may have became more stupid cause of the exams frying my brain cells.

There's a lot of ambiguity going on. I'm not not entirely sure what it means either.

[KVLEE]

oh no a gay poem

Anything related to love is considered gay to you. Hence your opinion doesn't count

Reminds me on those poems we used to write back in 6th grade, so many memories!
Wish I was 11 years old again. lol.

Mine sharing it?

Its legit. Not plagiarised, Its good.

Thankyou

I feel violently violated. The topic of the pome...oh my....


Still, good poem.

Thank-you 2

Is this incest or gay? Or both?

In Asia, we called our best friend brother and sister

I only see incest.

Its not gay because at the end of the 1st paragraph, it says "sis".

Unless it is refering to a "sissy" which can be an option, but then again, I don't think so.

No, it is sister.

ookkaayy?

Ogey

I'm usually not in to poems but this one is interesting. It's a well written one too, I salute you sir.

I have no idea, that's why I'm asking.
Also I may have became more stupid cause of the exams frying my brain cells.

I wrote this poem on behalf of my friend, to read this at his gf funeral

I'm honestly in awe at how good you are at writing, bravo.

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There's a lot of ambiguity going on. I'm not not entirely sure what it means either.

Haha thanks for the compliment.

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Also, the name of the poem is my angel, my soul, my breath, my Lynn. (Requested by my friend)

[rrix]

That night we were about to kiss,
In a street that was covered in mist.
"No," you insist,
That you're just my sis.

so um

as a genuine question does anyone know what is going on?

Like is this sbeve, is this some kind of "symbolism", is this just a friendly, platonic sibling kiss on the cheek, does this mean you got brother-zoned, am I reading this too deep and it's just incest, or what?

So far I'm kinda thinking that you liked a girl and got a "you're like a brother to me" but honestly at this point idk anymore

[NotTheCat]

I wrote this poem on behalf of my friend, to read this at his gf funeral

Well it is touching...
Sorry to hear about that.

[KVLEE]

so um

as a genuine question does anyone know what is going on?

Like is this sbeve, is this some kind of "symbolism", is this just a friendly, platonic sibling kiss on the cheek, does this mean you got brother-zoned, am I reading this too deep and it's just incest, or what?

So far I'm kinda thinking that you liked a girl and got a "you're like a brother to me" but honestly at this point idk anymore

Is my poem that hard to understand 0_0||
So, lynn and my friend love each other. When my friend is proposing (kissing) lynn push him back. My friend, of course, is wondering why, but lynn said they aren't a match, they are just friends.

Then one day, I brought along my friend to visit my gf (in hospital). He saw lynn among the hundreds patients (don't ask me how). Apparently, lynn has been lying to him. The reason she insist to break up with him is because she had been infected by tubercolosis, or whatever you called it, so they can never kiss unless she's cured.

Months later, she dies. How tragic, to see my bravest friend cry out loud infront of me.

[Sharox]

It's not hard to understand, "you're just my sis" is the line that's throwing everyone off. Out of context interpretations are loose and from someone who doesn't know the background it makes it hard to understand. And there are so many details to rave about. It shouldn't mean much, but the sentence just so happens to stick which make people miss the point.

And I'm wondering who says that line.

[m456]

oh no a gay poem

[KVLEE]

It's not hard to understand, "you're just my sis" is the line that's throwing everyone off. Out of context interpretations are loose and from someone who doesn't know the background it makes it hard to understand. And there are so many details to rave about. It shouldn't mean much, but the sentence just so happens to stick which make people miss the point.

And I'm wondering who says that line.

I rephrase it. The original one is "She said she treated my as a brother," said my friend.

[Axzyte]

Actually me moving to my new house was worst, somebody was attempting to rob me he won't stop, I tried to call the police but he would shoot the door knob. Thank God I'm alive.