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  • I'll rate your worlds!

    It's easy, give me your world name+ it's renderworld. And i'll pay you a visit.

    Also if it's not good enough, i'll give ya some tips!


    THIS THREAD IS STILL ALIVE, DON'T BE SHY TO POST YOUR WORLD.
    Last edited by Chem; 11-17-2018, 09:09 AM.
    ~Chemmie
    Discord: Chemmie #7714

  • #2
    A reply YO!

    IPROGRAMMC

    growtopiagame.com/worlds/iprogrammc.png

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    • #3



      here
      signature.

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      • #4
        I'm not sure about the gameplay, so...

        Maybe tips about GREATMOTHERSHIP.

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        Thanks *-*
        Originally posted by Chemistry Teacher
        Do not be afraid to talk to yourself. It is good to talk with a smart person.

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        • #5
          Originally posted by pannenkoek2012 View Post
          IPROGRAMMC

          growtopiagame.com/worlds/iprogrammc.png
          Well, your world is very good, i mean, it's a main world, and it has everything needed for a main world.
          But, the blocks you used were not suitable, you also feel that the world is empty, + the decoration was bad.
          The thing i liked in the world was the pixel art of your name, yet still needs work.

          What I suggest to make it better:
          *Add background in the buildings
          *Add a weather machine
          *Change doors to a different type of doors (e.g screen doors)
          *Change the type of blocks you use to a specific type, and a specific colour, and make sure you use block variation in your building.

          {Overall rating (for a main world): 4/10} Work harder mate.

          [WOTD Rating: 1/10] It's not suitable for WOTD.
          ~Chemmie
          Discord: Chemmie #7714

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          • #6
            Originally posted by ROOTbeerr View Post
            [ATTACH=CONFIG]204491[/ATTACH]


            here
            I did not complete the world tho, since i raged and smashed the lapt-- Ahem.
            Well, the parkour isn't soo hard and not soo easy, which is perfect. but a bit hard, just a bit.
            Building, block variation was used pretty well, but a bit overused, i mean, the world is a bit messy, but that's OK.
            No song, that's fine tho.
            Story: Very nice.
            {Rating 8/10} Would make an awesome WOTD.

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            Originally posted by The Nightmare View Post
            I'm not sure about the gameplay, so...

            Maybe tips about GREATMOTHERSHIP.

            [ATTACH=CONFIG]204492[/ATTACH]

            Thanks *-*
            Ah, this world, I visited it before.
            Building: Awesome, the ship looks awesome, yet there are some empty spaces around it.
            Story: Very good, I liked the part of decoding a specific thingy.
            Song: No song tho, but i liked how you placed music blocks across the ship, smart.

            {Rating: 8/10} I loved it.
            I hope you get WOTD.
            ~Chemmie
            Discord: Chemmie #7714

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            • #7
              LUNARTEMPLE good sir

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              • #8
                There goes nothing

                STONEY; Retrieve the keys!

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                IGN: SQUAiR
                Goals:
                Level 50: 73/50
                Focused Eyes: 100/100
                Golden Pickaxe:200/200
                Seil's Magic Orbs: 200/200

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                • #9
                  QYTHSTORE
                  1BONG
                  ROCKANTIUM

                  Rate them on a scale how well they fit their set categories.
                  . because yes ,

                  Changed my name to Proni2

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by Chem View Post
                    Well, your world is very good, i mean, it's a main world, and it has everything needed for a main world.
                    But, the blocks you used were not suitable, you also feel that the world is empty, + the decoration was bad.
                    The thing i liked in the world was the pixel art of your name, yet still needs work.

                    What I suggest to make it better:
                    *Add background in the buildings
                    *Add a weather machine
                    *Change doors to a different type of doors (e.g screen doors)
                    *Change the type of blocks you use to a specific type, and a specific colour, and make sure you use block variation in your building.

                    {Overall rating (for a main world): 4/10} Work harder mate.

                    [WOTD Rating: 1/10] It's not suitable for WOTD.
                    Well, I'm poor so I cannot afford Screen Doors or other blocks

                    I cannot afford Weather Machines either :/

                    I could try Stone Wall as a main block, but I don't know...

                    Currently, my account is banned, however I have an alt (DirtToDlFtw) with access to the world. I have no idea what blocks are suitable. And I'm poor till the ban is lifted, after which I have access to my 40 WLs. However, like many people in the game, I feel making the main world any better has no effect. After all, nobody visits my world unless I'm AFK there, and even then, very few people visit it.

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                    • #11
                      TuneSongs
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                      "I can see a rainbow. In your tears as they fall on down. I can see your soul grow. Through the pain as they hit the ground". ~ Sia.

                      Changed name to FabPiano
                      I'm a boy, please don't say that I am a girl..
                      Want some fabulous songs? TUNESONGS
                      Instagram: FabPianoGT

                      Read my first story! The beginning of FabPiano
                      Join my Discord: *Maintenace*
                      https://www.growtopiagame.com/forums...ng-of-FabPiano

                      Originally posted by M1tch
                      BlackIce was nuked from orbit! :wave: :hat:

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by LyveWyre View Post
                        LUNARTEMPLE good sir

                        What I did like about the world:
                        *The crescent pixel art, well made.
                        *The bridge's design, creative.
                        (Building is overall amazing)

                        Things I'd like to see improved in the world:
                        *Use spaces a bit more, i mean, your usage of space is fine, but it'd be better if you use em a bit more (e.g dig some holes in the dirt and make them "spectating rooms").
                        *Add more signs of the player talking to himself, that would make the storyline better.
                        -----------------------------------------
                        Building: Very good, liked the designs.
                        Story: Simple, needs more dialogs.
                        Song: No song mate, but i would suggest you add a type of music blocks across the world.

                        {Rating: 7/10} It's playable, might be a WOTD.
                        ~Chemmie
                        Discord: Chemmie #7714

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by squair View Post
                          STONEY; Retrieve the keys!

                          [ATTACH=CONFIG]204501[/ATTACH]
                          I did not complete the world tho, i got mad and raged etc..
                          but.

                          What i'd like to see improved in the world:
                          *Add more checkpoints
                          *The door that says "easy" isnt easy tho, the first step was hard, so please fix that.

                          *In the world, a Gateway To Adventure wasn't constructed well, so here are some tips
                          -For an example, the "Go get the rope" part should be like this:
                          Replace it with this: (-R`9Go get the rope), also add (+R`9I see that you have the rope.)
                          So this works like this, if you have the rope, the door will say "I see that you have the rope" but if you don't have the rope, it'll say "Go get the rope" (in yellow).

                          *About the story, add more dialogs and signs, the world looks like any other parkour world without a story.

                          -----------------
                          Song: Original (probably), it seems original, which is perfect.
                          Building: not so creative though, but there are some thingies that i liked in specific designs (e.g the way you coloured the keys to separate them).
                          Story: Needs work, If you want it to be a WOTD, add more story.

                          {Rating: 6.5/10} If you do a better job, i can guarantee you WOTD, the world name is suitable for the world which is awesome.


                          I believe in you mate!

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                          Originally posted by Joni2 View Post
                          QYTHSTORE
                          1BONG
                          ROCKANTIUM

                          Rate them on a scale how well they fit their set categories.
                          0/10
                          0/10
                          0/10
                          [short answer]



                          this is a joke, right?

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                          Originally posted by pannenkoek2012 View Post
                          Well, I'm poor so I cannot afford Screen Doors or other blocks

                          I cannot afford Weather Machines either :/

                          I could try Stone Wall as a main block, but I don't know...

                          Currently, my account is banned, however I have an alt (DirtToDlFtw) with access to the world. I have no idea what blocks are suitable. And I'm poor till the ban is lifted, after which I have access to my 40 WLs. However, like many people in the game, I feel making the main world any better has no effect. After all, nobody visits my world unless I'm AFK there, and even then, very few people visit it.
                          Using 1 type of blocks is also good, and if you can't afford weather machines or backgrounds, then, err.
                          I don't know really, haha.
                          Sometimes worlds need to be rich to be "good".

                          But at least i do know that you worked hard enough on your world, i mean, it's obvious really, and that's good.
                          ~Chemmie
                          Discord: Chemmie #7714

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                          • #14
                            Originally posted by BlackIce View Post
                            TuneSongs
                            [ATTACH=CONFIG]204516[/ATTACH]
                            Ooo Fab, I never knew you were a composer

                            Mate, the world is very nice.
                            The song of the world itself is wonderful.
                            So err, about the world:
                            *It's rainbowish, rainbow theme is done well.

                            so mm, there's no talk about the world, a typical music world, typical yet awesome.

                            I loved "THE MAGIC MUSTACHE".

                            {Rating (for a world of the category: Art): 8/10}
                            ~Chemmie
                            Discord: Chemmie #7714

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                            • #15
                              Originally posted by Chem View Post
                              I did not complete the world tho, i got mad and raged etc..
                              but.

                              What i'd like to see improved in the world:
                              *Add more checkpoints
                              *The door that says "easy" isnt easy tho, the first step was hard, so please fix that.

                              *In the world, a Gateway To Adventure wasn't constructed well, so here are some tips
                              -For an example, the "Go get the rope" part should be like this:
                              Replace it with this: (-R`9Go get the rope), also add (+R`9I see that you have the rope.)
                              So this works like this, if you have the rope, the door will say "I see that you have the rope" but if you don't have the rope, it'll say "Go get the rope" (in yellow).

                              *About the story, add more dialogs and signs, the world looks like any other parkour world without a story.

                              -----------------
                              Song: Original (probably), it seems original, which is perfect.
                              Building: not so creative though, but there are some thingies that i liked in specific designs (e.g the way you coloured the keys to separate them).
                              Story: Needs work, If you want it to be a WOTD, add more story.

                              {Rating: 6.5/10} If you do a better job, i can guarantee you WOTD, the world name is suitable for the world which is awesome.


                              I believe in you mate!

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                              0/10
                              0/10
                              0/10
                              [short answer]



                              this is a joke, right?

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                              Using 1 type of blocks is also good, and if you can't afford weather machines or backgrounds, then, err.
                              I don't know really, haha.
                              Sometimes worlds need to be rich to be "good".

                              But at least i do know that you worked hard enough on your world, i mean, it's obvious really, and that's good.
                              Oh, I thought you were rating the worlds in game with the /rate system. The 3 worlds I mentioned are #1 in their categories.
                              . because yes ,

                              Changed my name to Proni2

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