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    So, this is my first WOTD attempt, what do you think? I built it alone, and used only my imagination to make it!
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    Oops, I forgot to fill that one corner with sand, ignore it.
    EDIT: Now I filled it up OwO

  • #2
    You can add other things to make it more attractive probably fireworks over there or summer kite something like that

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    • #3
      Originally posted by UkyoKuonji View Post
      You can add other things to make it more attractive probably fireworks over there or summer kite something like that
      I'll do it, but I must wait until tomorrow to render it again, and change the WOTD submission render.

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      • #4
        Originally posted by HugeLock View Post
        I'll do it, but I must wait until tomorrow to render it again, and change the WOTD submission render.
        Good luck. Looks like you can write a words insid the sand. Probably *Summerfest*

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        • #5
          Tbh it looks low effort and bland. It’s just a whole bunch of sand with tons of unused space.
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          • #6
            Odric: i see a maze, i see a WOTD.

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            • #7
              Originally posted by ROOTbeerr View Post
              Tbh it looks low effort and bland. It’s just a whole bunch of sand with tons of unused space.
              Well, It's my first time, I was on a budget, I did it 100% alone.

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              • #8
                There's too much sand IMO. Try replacing part of it with another block (deep sand, maybe?)

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                • #9
                  Wayyyy too much sand although here’s a quick tip: Blend the sand with some limestone blocks.

                  Make the sandy part a little bit interesting for example make it look like a cave parkour. You could make worlds look nice without lots of wls. But you gotta make it very interesting some people suggest making a pixel art but I just give tips to make your world better. Also try putting wheat in the sand to represent some dead grass.

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                  Originally posted by ROOTbeerr View Post
                  Tbh it looks low effort and bland. It’s just a whole bunch of sand with tons of unused space.
                  True but he can improve it. I suggest that he should make it a bigger space like a cave looking sand or sand cave.
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                  • #10
                    It's nice, but yeah I think you should mix it with deep sand or other. goodluck man
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                    • #11
                      Try adding some fishes (e.g. Jellyfish, shark, etc.) and some plants different from the ones you used
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                      • #12
                        Like others have said, blend your sand with something else.
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                        • #13
                          Gameplay

                          I can tell just by looking at it that the gameplay isn't very good. It looks repetitive and unoriginal. Makes me want to not even test it out if I'm honest.
                          How to fix: Remake the parkour with more originality and variety, try not to use the same jump twice, especially not in a row.

                          The design is bland and needs way more variation.
                          How to fix: Use different blocks, preferably similiar in color. Something like texas limestone could look nice mixed in with the sand.
                          I might be back.

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                          • #14
                            Add some more details and decoration to it. And try to not make it too rectangular/cube shape, that's the worst part of anything. Maybe add some holes in the sand, then put treasure chests with some decorations.

                            Good luck!
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                            • #15
                              Originally posted by HugeLock View Post
                              So, this is my first WOTD attempt, what do you think? I built it alone, and used only my imagination to make it!
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                              Oops, I forgot to fill that one corner with sand, ignore it.
                              EDIT: Now I filled it up OwO
                              I feel like a giant block of sand just isn't too attractive to players. Mabye you could try adding in some more cool things, like pixel arts and more parkours and dont forget a cool VIP area for the lucky winners!.

                              Im sure after you add these things, your world is gonna look very epic! .
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