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    Where do you think I can improve my world ?
    GrowID : JunHongYT
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    It looks nice. Some suggestions...
    -I'm not sure if the clouds are really necessary. If you just added them to fill the empty space then I would remove.
    -Spikes- In some parts of the cave I think stalagmites and stalactites would fit better than twisted spikes. Also, The spikes above the tree could probably be painted or altered to make them more a part of the tree instead of on top.
    -Right now the bridge looks like it is somewhat floating. Maybe you could extend the supports to the ground or redesign the bridge?
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    • #3
      Originally posted by JoTheWarrior View Post
      It looks nice. Some suggestions...
      -I'm not sure if the clouds are really necessary. If you just added them to fill the empty space then I would remove.
      -Spikes- In some parts of the cave I think stalagmites and stalactites would fit better than twisted spikes. Also, The spikes above the tree could probably be painted or altered to make them more a part of the tree instead of on top.
      -Right now the bridge looks like it is somewhat floating. Maybe you could extend the supports to the ground or redesign the bridge?
      Thank You, I will take note of that.
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      • #4
        Overall world is beautiful but I believe you could’ve used the space a bit more efficient.
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          (I showed the parts I like/dislike on the render, green circles are the parts I liked, reds are disliked)

          First of all, I’ll tell the parts I liked. The perspective at clouds using the wallpaper is so cool, you should do that for other clouds too. I also liked the wooden house&the building above it.


          Suggestions: The buildings at mine is not really mine themed, check out the items released with spelunkorama update such as dwarwen items. The terrain/cave backgrounds are not glued to each other which is a point too. I also suggest you to use the cloud part a bit more efficiently with obelisks/sungates ect.


          I hope my suggestions will be helpful, good luck with your WOTD attempt.
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          • #6
            Originally posted by Bardes View Post
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            (I showed the parts I like/dislike on the render, green circles are the parts I liked, reds are disliked)

            First of all, I’ll tell the parts I liked. The perspective at clouds using the wallpaper is so cool, you should do that for other clouds too. I also liked the wooden house&the building above it.


            Suggestions: The buildings at mine is not really mine themed, check out the items released with spelunkorama update such as dwarwen items. The terrain/cave backgrounds are not glued to each other which is a point too. I also suggest you to use the cloud part a bit more efficiently with obelisks/sungates ect.


            I hope my suggestions will be helpful, good luck with your WOTD attempt.
            Okay, noted.
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