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  • feedback on my finished wotd! - 1985supermario

    so i finished my world and i needed some feedback on it. here is the render:

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    the world also has the supermario theme song.
    goals

    40 dls- 30/40
    2 mag plants- 1/2
    level 35- completed!
    own a profitable buy+ - completed
    win wotd- waiting

  • #2
    it kinda sucks

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    ▷▷Retired poster◁◁
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    https://youtu.be/wJZjZyuHJFY

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    • #3
      Looks too spacious. Try adding more!
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      • #4
        As I said on one of your old posts, I know you're trying to establish a mario/classic type of design here but in doing that, the world gets a bit too drab. Try adding more variation of blocks and perhaps backgrounds as well. Also, try to add a "Adventure Begins" so that there will be a time limit every level and to also show the level number much like the original mario game.
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        • #5
          Originally posted by LancePlaysYT View Post
          As I said on one of your old posts, I know you're trying to establish a mario/classic type of design here but in doing that, the world gets a bit too drab. Try adding more variation of blocks and perhaps backgrounds as well. Also, try to add a "Adventure Begins" so that there will be a time limit every level and to also show the level number much like the original mario game.
          If I did that, it would look plain and simple, so ima just change some other stuff
          goals

          40 dls- 30/40
          2 mag plants- 1/2
          level 35- completed!
          own a profitable buy+ - completed
          win wotd- waiting

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