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    So I was working on a book a year ago, but never made it past Chapter 2 due to the harsh life in uni...
    I saw someone, Kraken I believe trying to work on a story and I just remembered I had this piece of writing stored somewhere in my laptop.
    Just curious, how well did I do? This is just the epilogue. Should I continue writing? There's going to be about around 40 chapters if I were to continue writing

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    Mind if you put it in a spoiler?
    But, the story is really amazing! That's the epilogue, right?
    The epilogue is so dramatic and sad, maybe you can make a story about it, but 40 chapters seems too much for me to read, (it depends on how many words per chapter though.)
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    Quote Originally Posted by ThoriqProdction View Post
    Mind if you put it in a spoiler?
    But, the story is really amazing! That's the epilogue, right?
    The epilogue is so dramatic and sad, maybe you can make a story about it, but 40 chapters seems too much for me to read, (it depends on how many words per chapter though.)
    Definitely, how do I put it in a spoiler, sorry I am kinda new in this forums.

    It's meant for publication so, yeah it's gonna be pretty long. I probably will upload a chapter or 2 a week :3
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    Quote Originally Posted by isla247 View Post
    Definitely, how do I put it in a spoiler, sorry I am kinda new in this forums.

    It's meant for publication so, yeah it's gonna be pretty long. I probably will upload a chapter or 2 a week :3
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    Isla, this is one of A work of art. The words really touched me tbh
    So does the vocabularies you used, it really matches the sorrowful situation.
    Well, im not good at making drama fictions, but you seem to be good.

    Oh, im pretty sure you should continue this, i felt that a sad story like this needs to be continued.
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    Wait. So he dreamt the whole situation? It says that he fell asleep and started dreaming about this girl. So the whole epilogue is a dream??? I think I'm missing something big, but I don't know exactly what.

    Really nice writing though. Your words really matched the overall theme of the story.
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