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    Quote Originally Posted by Anton0202 View Post
    Snowdale, is a winter-themed world, about the town of snow, Snowdale. In this world, I focused heavily on the story and dialogue, as well as of course everything else! It contains lots of different kinds of content, and no parkour at all (which I find boring) Instead, I’ve added other kinds of stuff, like challenging puzzles, and many different quests!
    I won't tell you too much about the world in here, as I think people wouldn’t really read that, but I’m sure you’ll love the world! I put a lot of attention into... basically everything!
    Any kind of feedback is very welcomed, as well as thoughts/ideas!
    If you feel like, I’d love for you to test the world out ingame and tell me what you think here, but have in mind that the world is challenging, and might take a while!

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    I like it a lot.
    But due to my perfectionism...:
    - the clouds look quite ugly with those random singular blocks sticking out.
    - the foliage doesn't work with the green block trees
    - too little gold in the bottom right. Needs other things like idols, treasure chests, decor and such.
    - too many windows in such a small area with no real shape. They look to be placed there because "this area needs windows but I don't know how to incorporate them"
    - some areas do not need theatre curtains: it's a bit excessive.
    - that icy blue wallpaper you used in the top right cave, I'd use that for the icy lake below. The ocean rock juxtaposes too well.
    - roofs of buildings (especially in the top 1/10 of the world) are too stair-case like, and jagged.
    - a bit of inconsistency where you mix stone wall with snowy rocks in some areas, and others not. Middle area is decently spread, then the outer two areas are very sparse.
    - that podium made out of that St. Patrick's block at the top right is too even.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Techy View Post
    I like it a lot.
    But due to my perfectionism...:
    - the clouds look quite ugly with those random singular blocks sticking out.
    - the foliage doesn't work with the green block trees
    - too little gold in the bottom right. Needs other things like idols, treasure chests, decor and such.
    - too many windows in such a small area with no real shape. They look to be placed there because "this area needs windows but I don't know how to incorporate them"
    - some areas do not need theatre curtains: it's a bit excessive.
    - that icy blue wallpaper you used in the top right cave, I'd use that for the icy lake below. The ocean rock juxtaposes too well.
    - roofs of buildings (especially in the top 1/10 of the world) are too stair-case like, and jagged.
    - a bit of inconsistency where you mix stone wall with snowy rocks in some areas, and others not. Middle area is decently spread, then the outer two areas are very sparse.
    - that podium made out of that St. Patrick's block at the top right is too even.

    You can structure worlds well, but your detailing needs work.
    I’m happy you liked it, and thanks for all that feedback!
    I’ve actually thought about a few of those things before, for example about the inconsistency with the stone walls. And I’ve also heard the same thing about the clouds. I haven’t made clouds like that before, but just felt like doing it this time. I kind of disagree about perhaps one or two of your thoughts, but I’ll definitely have all your opinions in mind for my next project! Very helpful feedback
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    Bumping...
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    It looks epic!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Llucifer View Post
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    Quote Originally Posted by MrStreak View Post
    It looks epic!
    Thank you
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    So cool, i'll be visiting it soon as the servers are up~
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    Quote Originally Posted by MeepTheSheep View Post
    So cool, i'll be visiting it soon as the servers are up~
    I'll be there too as MeepTheSheep said, I'll be visiting it soon as the servers are up..Good luck

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    Quote Originally Posted by MeepTheSheep View Post
    So cool, i'll be visiting it soon as the servers are up~
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    I'll be there too as MeepTheSheep said, I'll be visiting it soon as the servers are up..Good luck
    I hope you’ll like it!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Anton0202 View Post
    Snowdale, is a winter-themed world, about the town of snow, Snowdale. In this world, i focused heavily on the story and dialouges, as well as of course everything else! It contains lots of different kinds of content, and no parkour at all (which I find boring) Instead, I’ve added other kinds of stuff, like challenging puzzles, and many different quests!
    I wont tell you too much about the world in here, as I think people wouldn’t really read that, but I’m sure you’ll love the world! I put a lot of attention into... basically everything!
    Any kind of feedback is very welcomed, aswell as thoughts/ideas!
    If you feel like, I’d love for you to test the world out ingame and tell me what you think here, but have in mind that the world is challenging, and might take a while!



    I hope you’ll like the world!
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    Nice world, reminds me of one I tried to build a while ago, except this is upgraded x100. The one I tried to do was just a house with trees on the top and a giant singular tree besides it, yeah I can't build... can I just say... mine was a major fail lol
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    Where is the deserved WOTD for this world?
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    Bumping. Would be awesome if some other people could try this world out, you wont regret it!
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