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    Default 30 wl giveaway for making a story with one major rule

    It can be any story you want, no rules in length, but the bigger, the better. The more interesting, the better. Overall, the more story like, the better. To spice things up though, theres a teeny weeny little rule....


    The story must have the word "pal"(it can be upper cased also) in the middle of every sentence. It can have an s added to it too, but it can't be used in a word (like "PayPal")


    This means every sentence must have an odd number of words in it, and the middle word must be "pal". The best entry wins. I'll be ending this in a week or if I see a REALLY good story.

    Mini example would be:

    The ancient land of good pals lived in a peaceful epoch. That was until some bad pal decided to nolonger be pals! What ever would the pals do to save him?



    Enjoy






    To help give a slight rule thing to it/ give bonuses, here are some things that would make the story ranked better than the others.

    If it is a serious story +
    If it is a kinky story +
    If it is a tragic story + +
    If it has plot +
    If it is over 10 sentences + +
    If it is over 30 sentences + + + +

    Also, slight minus points if...

    It has the word "Buddy" (or with an S) -
    It has the word "Friend" (or with an S) -
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    One day a pal wanted to reveal his feelings to another pal
    That pal went to the other pal house and he started to prepare to confess his feelings about the pal that he loved so much
    But soon that pal he started to feel panicked, then the other pal opened the door and saw his pal standing still.

    The pal homie said, -hey pal whats wrong pal-
    That pal then started to run away leaving his pal companion confused about why his pal ran away

    -sigh- said the pal, -another day will be then- that pal thougth to himself

    To be continued ===>
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    Quote Originally Posted by holaloh View Post
    One day a pal wanted to reveal his feelings to another pal
    That pal went to the other pal house and he started to prepare to confess his feelings about the pal that he loved so much
    But soon that pal he started to feel panicked, then the other pal opened the door and saw his pal standing still.

    The pal homie said, -hey pal whats wrong pal-
    That pal then started to run away leaving his pal companion confused about why his pal ran away

    -sigh- said the pal, -another day will be then- that pal thougth to himself

    To be continued ===>
    Uh, thanks for your attempt, not to criticize, but you kinda did it wrong.


    Each setence is suppost to have the word pal in the middle. To clarify better, lets say your sentence is 5 words long. "Pal" must be the 3rd word.
    If the sentence is 7 words long, Pal must be the 4th word.

    Also, put periods in your sentences.

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    2094 was the start of what pals called the Modern Growtopian era. A devastating conflict between the pals and bot powers had ended. But only a handful of pals had survived the nuclear war. To help rebuild the world, the World Treaty Representitive had come to help the pals, create a currency that could be used to strengthen the City of Buildo. The Mayor and his advisor had come up with a currency for the pals, which was named the “world lock”, this would be the basis of the country. Now there were two pals that disliked this idea. Buildo’s first mayor and advisor pals were named Seth and Hamumu. After establishing the world lock, the pals set off to build a utopia. Their mega uptopian city would be known by pals all throughout the world from Tera to America. While building their cities the pals suddenly became aware of something. All of the citizens of Buildo, the pals, had different goals, and some were greedy. They tore apart the established city, these pals, which were known as “scammers and hackers.” After countless civil wars, these sinister pals were finally brought to true justice. As a reminder to build and grow with pals, the city of Buildo was renamed into Growtopia.
    The Country of Buildo was home to many pals that lived together in unity, peace and harmony. Nothing could break the family relationship between all pals, and what’s more their little economy was booming! And finally the pioneering pals got a rest, after many years… BUT this is what the scammer, hacker pals wanted, they had weakened Seth and Hamumu. The scammer and hacker pals attacked Growtopia, countless pals were converted into scammers and hackers. Seth and Hamumu called the F(u)BIsoft pal, before the poison took its full effect.

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    In the beginning of Paliverse. There were twin Omega pals named Sith and Hamu.
    The Paliverse was just a vast space of nothingness,Until the Twin Omega Pals decided to create a world, The Pal World.
    Full of Living things called PALS created to fill the Nothingness of Paliverse.
    Sith is a fond of their creation, He gave the PALS all sorts of Gifts and graces and in return, PALS worshipped Sith.
    However Hamu, really detest the PALS, He wanted to Get rid of them.
    So he created another living form created to Kill the PALS.
    The SPAMS.
    SPAMS can multiply 10 times faster than the PALS and because of that SPAMS would steal blessings from the PALS causing the PALS to have no food.
    Sith However Noticed the PALS are decreasing in Numbers, He went to The Pal world to see what was happening.
    When he went down, He was horrified, The land is full of malnourished PALS.
    Sith, Enranged, Went to Hamu to ask him if he knew what was happening to the PALS.
    Hamu admitted that it was him that made the SPAMS to Steal Sith's blessings for the PALS.
    This made the Twins brawl, The twin omega pals have the exact same level of power, but the prayers and faithfulness of the PALS to Sith Made him Stronger and defeated Hamu.
    But Sith was weaken and now without his twin pal, he knew he won't live much Longer.
    So he decided to use all of his remaining power to return the Pal world into its original form.
    The PALS became peaceful once again. Telling the story of the Twin Omega Pals generation after generation.

    The end.
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    Surely i win

    I hope you didn't copy me swords gt
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    Well, ssdly we didnt have as much people enter as i eanted. Oh well, im a man of my word.

    Anyway, yes, you, enchanted win.
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    Oh man! Congrats Enchanted
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