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    Hey guys! I want to improve my world, but the problem is that I cannot spot things, that have to be improved, cause it is my world, and you know how hard is to judge yourself

    Well, I'd like to hear your opinions, especially how to improve the area below the temple.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Rimuoi View Post
    Bump bump bump
    What do you mean?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rimuoi View Post
    Bump bump bump
    I'm sure the bump 6 minutes after the thread was posted really helped.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Juliano (IamWood) View Post
    Hey guys! I want to improve my world, but the problem is that I cannot spot things, that have to be improved, cause it is my world, and you know how hard is to judge yourself

    Well, I'd like to hear your opinions, especially how to improve the area below the temple.


    Here is the render, world name TheIdolOfGold, and I am......IamWood

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    the world already looks amazing... good luck on wotd

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    Quote Originally Posted by Devours View Post
    the world already looks amazing... good luck on wotd
    Thanks a lot!

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    Hmm...
    Compare to my worlds that is much better or should I say way better than my worlds

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    Quote Originally Posted by Orca View Post
    Hmm...
    Compare to my worlds that is much better or should I say way better than my worlds
    Oh thank you

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    I would give this a 7/10 for WOTD. Also... Good luck

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    Quote Originally Posted by 1NB4 View Post
    I would give this a 7/10 for WOTD. Also... Good luck
    Awesome! thank you!

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    Hey Wood

    I think you should try to add some more colours, as it is a jungle.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Anton0202 View Post
    Hey Wood

    I think you should try to add some more colours, as it is a jungle.
    Ahh, the man I've been waiting for. Colours? Good idea! What do you think are places worth colouring?

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    Quote Originally Posted by MrStreak View Post
    add some birds
    Good idea, but seagulls do not live in jungle

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    the tree up top looks pretty nice, could use some more decoration inside though.
    the cave dirt on the right looks relatively plain, but has a cluster of rocks concentrated on one spot. could spread them out a little.
    waterfall looks a bit weird, might try working on that.
    the upper part of the cave on the left (right below the steel tables) looks kinda artificial, i'd try to adjust things on that part, cave platforms and torches for the rest of the cave could also look good.
    the part with the rock bg at the bottom looks off without any blocks to compliment it. Try adding some stone walls near the rock bg.
    also try adding some rocks or decoration inside the cave dirt on the left.
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    Quote Originally Posted by FyreX View Post
    the tree up top looks pretty nice, could use some more decoration inside though.
    the cave dirt on the right looks relatively plain, but has a cluster of rocks concentrated on one spot. could spread them out a little.
    waterfall looks a bit weird, might try working on that.
    the upper part of the cave on the left (right below the steel tables) looks kinda artificial, i'd try to adjust things on that part, cave platforms and torches for the rest of the cave could also look good.
    the part with the rock bg at the bottom looks off without any blocks to compliment it. Try adding some stone walls near the rock bg.
    also try adding some rocks or decoration inside the cave dirt on the left.
    Good advice, thanks

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    Waterfall doesn't look natural. It is wide from above and narrow from below?
    Try blending the ground, adding ocean rock as speckles doesn't work out.
    Trees could've had a bit more greenery.

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