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    The story:

    You are a 23 year old nuclear power plant worker, it's a routine nightshift, and suddenly, you hear two really loud explosions, and you start tasting metal.
    You instantly remember that the taste of metal is an early symptom of radiation poisoning from your training.
    You are in shock for a few moments, then you start realizing that you have to get out immediately to avoid being irradiated.
    But there are many hazardous objects in your way, and you only have a limited amount of time left.
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    Yes, the fire is intended.
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    Bump.
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    You should pick up the seed
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    Lol that's good but I'm give up on step 2 because my parkour skill very bad

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    Looks very square, and generally (for the most part) like any other parkour near the bottom. I haven't played the world though, so I can only judge from what the render looks like.

    I like the idea of the fire, too, though I do hope you'll pop in every once and awhile to clear it away from areas so that it won't end up being impossible for players' to get through without a fire hose.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cloverlord View Post
    Looks very square, and generally (for the most part) like any other parkour near the bottom. I haven't played the world though, so I can only judge from what the render looks like.

    I like the idea of the fire, too, though I do hope you'll pop in every once and awhile to clear it away from areas so that it won't end up being impossible for players' to get through without a fire hose.
    The world looks really empty on the render for some reason, but in-game it doesn't feel empty at all.
    The fire doesn't need to be cleared, since there's water stopping it from spreading too far, so no fire hoses are needed.
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    Quote Originally Posted by HugeLock View Post
    The story:

    You are a 23 year old nuclear power plant worker, it's a routine nightshift, and suddenly, you hear two really loud explosions, and you start tasting metal.
    You instantly remember that the taste of metal is an early symptom of radiation poisoning from your training.
    You are in shock for a few moments, then you start realizing that you have to get out immediately to avoid being irradiated.
    But there are many hazardous objects in your way, and you only have a limited amount of time left.
    ----
    Yes, the fire is intended.
    ----
    World has: Punch jammer, Zombie jammer.
    Storyline
    Fun medium-hard parkour
    Adventure items
    Howler
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    Render: Name:  uncontrolledfission.png
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    Looks like there was minimal effort put into it. Just do not expect it to win WOTD.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jedaki View Post
    Looks like there was minimal effort put into it. Just do not expect it to win WOTD.
    I'll improve on the hospital design, make it feel less empty, put a big part of parkour into the smoke cloud, etc.

    I will update this thread once I do it. It was definitely not minimal effort, I spent 300 World locks, and the whole weekend to build it, around 35 Hours total.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kartosh View Post
    You didn't see graphite. You didn't. You didn't, because it's not there!
    Oh, I forgot the graphite haha.
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    Did you use a world planner?
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    Quote Originally Posted by tatertots View Post
    Did you use a world planner?
    Yes to design it.
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    I feel like some parts of the world have blocks that are too concentrated or are stacked on top of one another, like the surgical waste, biohazard blocks, aqua cave crystal and air conditioners (At some parts). Maybe space them out a bit more evenly?

    Also maybe add some accents to the exterior of your hospital to give the building a less rectangular shape?
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    Here's the final version of this WOTD attempt (hopefully success).
    I upgraded a few things.
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    Hi there, I really like the world. I don't think it will win wotd but you have potential if you make other worlds. To win wotd you need more effort. The storyline is cool, but I think the world could be a little stronger. I think a player would just get bored if they have to go straight down halls the whole time. But once again I like the world for what it is.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hockeybro88 View Post
    Hi there, I really like the world. I don't think it will win wotd but you have potential if you make other worlds. To win wotd you need more effort. The storyline is cool, but I think the world could be a little stronger. I think a player would just get bored if they have to go straight down halls the whole time. But once again I like the world for what it is.
    I agree with this ^
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