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    Default That night we were about to kiss

    That night we were about to kiss,
    In a street that was covered in mist.
    "No," you insist,
    That you're just my sis.

    I bellowed why.
    And clench my fist tight
    Water droplets fell from the sky,
    So did your eyes.

    My world turned into shades of grey.
    What have I done wrong?
    For you told me to go away
    That we will never come along.

    Oh, how ignorant I am,
    To believe the lie you told.
    Not to give a damn,
    Till the truth unfolds.

    When I found you,
    You were about to cry,
    A heart broken in two
    Asking me why.

    A forbidden love
    Between two, different gods
    Who cursed them from above.
    I found you against all odds.

    Now I'm the one with tears
    Your health failed us.
    Oh how many years
    Will I watch you "fuss"?

    "Don't cry," you croaked,
    "I'll hold you always."
    I climbed in and choked
    On my tears in those days.

    Someday, we'll be happy,
    Walking by the lake hand in hand
    For now, oh how my love is sappy
    But your arms is now my homeland.

    I touched the picture of your face,
    Whispering your name,
    "Lynn, you're so brave,"
    As I kneel before your grave.
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    Some of you might remember the poem I wrote few months ago, it is an incomplete work as I just couldn't finished it with the overwhelming sadness and stress. Here it is, a complete poem of my angel, my soul, my breath, my Lynn.

    Also, if you saw me online in gt, that's probably isnt me (unless i say so). I gave my account to my friend since long ago.
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    Wait wait wait...
    What is this?
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    Quote Originally Posted by NotTheCat View Post
    Wait wait wait...
    What is this?
    Probably a cat?
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    Quote Originally Posted by NotTheCat View Post
    Wait wait wait...
    What is this?
    you tell me

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    Quote Originally Posted by NotTheCat View Post
    Wait wait wait...
    What is this?
    he copied and paste this,
    this is a poetry

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    Quote Originally Posted by KVLEE View Post
    That night we were about to kiss,
    In a street that was covered in mist.
    "No," you insist,
    That you're just my sis.

    I bellowed why.
    And clench my fist tight
    Water droplets fell from the sky,
    So did your eyes.

    My world turned into shades of grey.
    What have I done wrong?
    For you told me to go away
    That we will never come along.

    Oh, how ignorant I am,
    To believe the lie you told.
    Not to give a damn,
    Till the truth unfolds.

    When I found you,
    You were about to cry,
    A heart broken in two
    Asking me why.

    A forbidden love
    Between two, different gods
    Who cursed them from above.
    I found you against all odds.

    Now I'm the one with tears
    Your health failed us.
    Oh how many years
    Will I watch you "fuss"?

    "Don't cry," you croaked,
    "I'll hold you always."
    I climbed in and choked
    On my tears in those days.

    Someday, we'll be happy,
    Walking by the lake hand in hand
    For now, oh how my love is sappy
    But your arms is now my homeland.

    I touched the picture of your face,
    Whispering your name,
    "Lynn, you're so brave,"
    As I kneel before your grave.
    _____________________________
    Some of you might remember the poem I wrote few months ago, it is an incomplete work as I just couldn't finished it with the overwhelming sadness and stress. Here it is, a complete poem of my angel, my soul, my breath, my Lynn.

    Also, if you saw me online in gt, that's probably isnt me (unless i say so). I gave my account to my friend since long ago.
    copy and paste
    Hey Bruh

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jrun View Post
    he copied and paste this,
    this is a poetry

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    copy and paste
    Prove it. Funny how it somehow appeared in my memo. Weird....

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    oh no a gay poem
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    Reminds me on those poems we used to write back in 6th grade, so many memories!
    Wish I was 11 years old again. lol.
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    Its legit. Not plagiarised, Its good.
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    I feel violently violated. The topic of the pome...oh my....


    Still, good poem.
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    Is this incest or gay? Or both?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Oma357 View Post
    Is this incest or gay? Or both?
    I only see incest.

    Its not gay because at the end of the 1st paragraph, it says "sis".

    Unless it is refering to a "sissy" which can be an option, but then again, I don't think so.
    They are two types of people in the world. Me and not me.

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    I'm usually not in to poems but this one is interesting. It's a well written one too, I salute you sir.


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    Quote Originally Posted by KVLEE View Post
    you tell me
    I have no idea, that's why I'm asking.
    Also I may have became more stupid cause of the exams frying my brain cells.
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    I'm honestly in awe at how good you are at writing, bravo.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NotTheCat View Post
    I have no idea, that's why I'm asking.
    Also I may have became more stupid cause of the exams frying my brain cells.
    There's a lot of ambiguity going on. I'm not not entirely sure what it means either.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DynPlaysGT View Post
    oh no a gay poem
    Anything related to love is considered gay to you. Hence your opinion doesn't count
    Quote Originally Posted by Friedrich Nietzsche View Post
    Reminds me on those poems we used to write back in 6th grade, so many memories!
    Wish I was 11 years old again. lol.
    Mine sharing it?
    Quote Originally Posted by Caine View Post
    Its legit. Not plagiarised, Its good.
    Thankyou
    Quote Originally Posted by Malware View Post
    I feel violently violated. The topic of the pome...oh my....


    Still, good poem.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Oma357 View Post
    Is this incest or gay? Or both?
    In Asia, we called our best friend brother and sister
    Quote Originally Posted by Malware View Post
    I only see incest.

    Its not gay because at the end of the 1st paragraph, it says "sis".

    Unless it is refering to a "sissy" which can be an option, but then again, I don't think so.
    No, it is sister.
    Quote Originally Posted by HugeLock View Post
    ookkaayy?
    Ogey
    Quote Originally Posted by Superparty View Post
    I'm usually not in to poems but this one is interesting. It's a well written one too, I salute you sir.

    Quote Originally Posted by NotTheCat View Post
    I have no idea, that's why I'm asking.
    Also I may have became more stupid cause of the exams frying my brain cells.
    I wrote this poem on behalf of my friend, to read this at his gf funeral
    Quote Originally Posted by Sharox View Post
    I'm honestly in awe at how good you are at writing, bravo.

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    There's a lot of ambiguity going on. I'm not not entirely sure what it means either.
    Haha thanks for the compliment.

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    Also, the name of the poem is my angel, my soul, my breath, my Lynn. (Requested by my friend)

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    Quote Originally Posted by KVLEE View Post
    That night we were about to kiss,
    In a street that was covered in mist.
    "No," you insist,
    That you're just my sis.
    so um

    as a genuine question does anyone know what is going on?

    Like is this sbeve, is this some kind of "symbolism", is this just a friendly, platonic sibling kiss on the cheek, does this mean you got brother-zoned, am I reading this too deep and it's just incest, or what?

    So far I'm kinda thinking that you liked a girl and got a "you're like a brother to me" but honestly at this point idk anymore
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    Quote Originally Posted by KVLEE View Post
    I wrote this poem on behalf of my friend, to read this at his gf funeral
    Well it is touching...
    Sorry to hear about that.
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    Quote Originally Posted by rrix View Post
    so um

    as a genuine question does anyone know what is going on?

    Like is this sbeve, is this some kind of "symbolism", is this just a friendly, platonic sibling kiss on the cheek, does this mean you got brother-zoned, am I reading this too deep and it's just incest, or what?

    So far I'm kinda thinking that you liked a girl and got a "you're like a brother to me" but honestly at this point idk anymore
    Is my poem that hard to understand 0_0||
    So, lynn and my friend love each other. When my friend is proposing (kissing) lynn push him back. My friend, of course, is wondering why, but lynn said they aren't a match, they are just friends.

    Then one day, I brought along my friend to visit my gf (in hospital). He saw lynn among the hundreds patients (don't ask me how). Apparently, lynn has been lying to him. The reason she insist to break up with him is because she had been infected by tubercolosis, or whatever you called it, so they can never kiss unless she's cured.

    Months later, she dies. How tragic, to see my bravest friend cry out loud infront of me.

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