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    Default EKKO - The Boy Who Shattered Time

    hey there, i have recently decided to build a world for my guild inside the guild home which would match with the guild's name as well as the world name !
    Ekko is a character from the video game League Of Legends (which is my guild's name) ,he's a lost child who learned to control time using a shattered crystal shard that he later merged into a powerful device which he called "Z-Drive"

    I added as well a full story in the world about Ekko's past and how he learned to control time and use it for the sake of his friends (the story is based on Ekko's lore from League Of Legends Universe)
    The song was transcribed by me : League of Legends - Ranked Champion Select.


    This is my first time building a world in a very loooong time, so i really need some feedback on how i can improve the world, is it wotd worthy?
    Come to EKKO and do the adventure map and let me know what you think of it !

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    bump , i need some opinions
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    Is this Zaun or the sewers besides Twitch?
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    Quote Originally Posted by TeachMeHow View Post
    Is this Zaun or the sewers besides Twitch?
    basically its whats below Piltover, totally not a clean city
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    Quote Originally Posted by astinotrix View Post
    basically its whats below Piltover, totally not a clean city
    Is it the sewers or the Zaun itself
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    Quote Originally Posted by TeachMeHow View Post
    Is it the sewers or the Zaun itself
    its Zaun ;-;
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    bump
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    When i saw your thread tittle i was like "Ooh Ekko, it reminds me of League of Legends champion"

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    Quote Originally Posted by Deterxfox View Post
    When i saw your thread tittle i was like "Ooh Ekko, it reminds me of League of Legends champion"
    yea thats what the guild and guild world are about
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    ekko remind me of my friend, ekkoes

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    Let's begin with the positives.

    I like how witty the world is. Yeah, it's very astonishing. One example is when the story says something about echoes of reality and there's the mirage platform. It's great. Also, the story narration is PERFECT. Flawless and lit.

    Now with the other side of the things,

    It kinda looks empty. The idea of filling the world with grimstone is kinda not absurd. You know, seeing one block althrough out the journey us nauseating. The parkour is too linear, people have no place to wander around. What a great way to fix this is build the Zaun itself in the world so you cab showcase the beauty of the story pretty well. Aside that, some blocks doesn't end up well being together. One example is those climbing vines with rocket thrusters. They just don't make sense together.

    Edit: This is an honest feedback and opinionated suggestion.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Gungnirs View Post
    Let's begin with the positives.

    I like how witty the world is. Yeah, it's very astonishing. One example is when the story says something about echoes of reality and there's the mirage platform. It's great. Also, the story narration is PERFECT. Flawless and lit.

    Now with the other side of the things,

    It kinda looks empty. The idea of filling the world with grimstone is kinda not absurd. You know, seeing one block althrough out the journey us nauseating. The parkour is too linear, people have no place to wander around. What a great way to fix this is build the Zaun itself in the world so you cab showcase the beauty of the story pretty well. Aside that, some blocks doesn't end up well being together. One example is those climbing vines with rocket thrusters. They just don't make sense together.

    Edit: This is an honest feedback and opinionated suggestion.
    tysm for every side you mentionned , i realized a few flaws the world has and ill try to work more on improving it from the negative sides u mentionned when i have some free time !
    ill think about making more free space for people to hang around too, rather than a straight way from the white door leading to the long parkour.
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