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    Comment down your judgements about my world. May it be good or bad. Thank you
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    I loved the design of the world but does it have a story tho?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Scawt View Post
    I loved the design of the world but does it have a story tho?
    Yeah the story is about the Water Princess and the Fire Prince that was unexpectedly crossed by faith and the two experienced love at first sight. But they arent actually meant for each other.
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    Rly like this
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    Cool Amazing!

    This world looks fantastic! You sure did a very good job in building this very enticing design.

    ++I think you should enlist this in the WOTD thread. Good luck, haha!
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    Quote Originally Posted by グローちゃん View Post
    Yeah the story is about the Water Princess and the Fire Prince that was unexpectedly crossed by faith and the two experienced love at first sight. But they arent actually meant for each other.
    That’s kinda sad
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    Quote Originally Posted by SukaProjek View Post
    kool werld
    Thanks hehe <3

    Quote Originally Posted by sinecosine View Post
    This world looks fantastic! You sure did a very good job in building this very enticing design.

    ++I think you should enlist this in the WOTD thread. Good luck, haha!
    Yeah I have submitted it, hopefully I win :>

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    At the first time i look at the picture I was like...

    "OOO... WOW. Fireboy and the Watergirl"

    *bring back old memories*
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    Quote Originally Posted by ×D A N T E× View Post
    At the first time i look at the picture I was like...

    "OOO... WOW. Fireboy and the Watergirl"

    *bring back old memories*
    Oh, that game! I used to play it with my cousin and we both rage because we arent good at teamwork. Lol, but we somehow managed to make it to the furthest level. Haha.

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    Story is suited for this world, but yet it's another biome world, unoriginal
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    Quote Originally Posted by グローちゃん View Post
    Yeah the story is about the Water Princess and the Fire Prince that was unexpectedly crossed by faith and the two experienced love at first sight. But they arent actually meant for each other.
    so thats romeo and juliet story?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jedaki View Post
    so thats romeo and juliet story?
    Romeo and Juliet is the most overrated in all of literature. No idea why Shakespeare gets so much praise.

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    I mean why would this ever be bad? No one in the right mind would say it's bad.
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    Maybe turn the fire one so that they are symmetrical and pointing at eachother?

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    This world is pretty good, goodluck!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Deftera View Post
    Story is suited for this world, but yet it's another biome world, unoriginal
    Damn, it's been a long time since I heard someone complain about biome worlds.
    It's a biome world yeah, but if it's a great world, I see no problems with it winning WOTD.
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    I haven't seen such an amazing biome-themed world for quite some time. The design itself is enticing enough, to begin with. Plus the story? I am sure that you have a good shot at getting WOTD.
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