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    ....take a visit of my comic (was made from myself) and read it as well :]?

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    It seemed to have a good start! Though, you should try practicing your English grammar though. I can see a few errors. Nice attempt, regardless.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Electrolava9 View Post
    ....take a visit of my comic (was made from myself) and read it as well :]?

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    Im not invoke. But if you interest to it, then go see.
    Hey Electrolava9!

    As a digital artist, I really do commend you for your artistic skills. The vibrant colors of the characters are nice, and I agree with the input @SixFace had given, too!

    Thanks for sharing. ^^
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    Quote Originally Posted by SixFace View Post
    It seemed to have a good start! Though, you should try practicing your English grammar though. I can see a few errors. Nice attempt, regardless.
    Yup, i'm learning english currently. Either way, thanks for pointing out.
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    bad plot cuz introverts don't call people to sit with them cuz they're too much of an introvert to do so overall 0/10

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    Quote Originally Posted by Electrolava9 View Post
    Yup, i'm learning english currently. Either way, thanks for pointing out.
    The Grammar mistakes are normal tbh, everyone really has them, but make sure you learn from those mistakes. So it’s okay to have grammatical errors at the start.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Liquify View Post
    bad plot cuz introverts don't call people to sit with them cuz they're too much of an introvert to do so overall 0/10

    jk it's ok
    The dialogues are F O R I N S T A N C E S, My man.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TobyLerasco View Post
    The Grammar mistakes are normal tbh, everyone really has them, but make sure you learn from those mistakes. So it’s okay to have grammatical errors at the start.
    That's why. I always try to evaluate my mistakes from the time being.
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    Quote Originally Posted by CommanderAly View Post
    Hey Electrolava9!

    As a digital artist, I really do commend you for your artistic skills. The vibrant colors of the characters are nice, and I agree with the input @SixFace had given, too!

    Thanks for sharing. ^^
    Never seen you before, but i'd appreciate it!
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    It's nice, but try to improve the English, it's really good overall.
    I couldn't draw that well if I wanted to.

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    Is it just me or everytime I saw a purple dragon, it reminds me of Spyro

    Anyways 7/10, need some more beeg-eyed dragons
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    Quote Originally Posted by HugeLock View Post
    It's nice, but try to improve the English, it's really good overall.
    I couldn't draw that well if I wanted to.
    Like everyone said, yes. Fornately, hehe!

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    Quote Originally Posted by BoxeyBoy View Post
    Is it just me or everytime I saw a purple dragon, it reminds me of Spyro

    Anyways 7/10, need some more beeg-eyed dragons
    That's not purple, but pink. It's character of Crunchyy FYI.
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    Cute comic, I appreciate the fact that it has dragons.

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    It's cool & characters are absolutely nice. I'll agree with SixFace & TobyLerasco, but I don't mind grammar mistakes, since everyone makes them & good luck!

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    Is this a bioshock reference
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    hey!! its a nice art you got there!! i think its a really nice short comic, but u might want to change the font into the one which is easier to read!!

    i googled and some of the usual typical what comic book used are: comic sans, sequntialist, manga temple, etc
    keep up the good work!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Intensifies View Post
    hey!! its a nice art you got there!! i think its a really nice short comic, but u might want to change the font into the one which is easier to read!!

    i googled and some of the usual typical what comic book used are: comic sans, sequntialist, manga temple, etc
    keep up the good work!!
    I've been waiting for this response, finally you're notice that i should to change the font . Thanks for recommendation!
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    Another comic is arrive, click here
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