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    Quote Originally Posted by R4Z View Post
    tldr plz

    or should i read all of it?
    TLDR: he ends up in a mysterious place (his memory) and he learns good lessons about bad experiences

    to OP: this, is a masterpiece and could possibly be one of the best stories I have ever read. I see no problems with it, no stressing issues and cringe at all. Very good short fantastical story!
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    This is written in both first person and second person POVs simultaneously, which is not a thing and makes it extremely confusing as to whom is speaking, which character is the protagonist, and where the plot is going.
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    Im leaving a . here to read it later. an A for effort tho
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    Astigmatisme: Gruw knight

    Also Astigmatisme: A STUDENT

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    Hey so I published this story on Wattpad.

    The story is more or less identical, apart from some grammatical fixes and revising some part that doesn't make sense

    Read it here : wattpad.com/story/213253912
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    Ok i read it. It's good.

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