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    World: THEMAPHUNT

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    The Story Is About A Teenager Who Went To The Frozen Hills To Find The Treasure His Father Buried Decades Ago. His 2 Brothers Died Here Before Him While Searching For The Same Thing. When You Arrived You Met A Old Man Called Danny Roosevelt, And He Has A Map Of The Mountains, He's Gonna Help You Find The Treasure...

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    Heya! I'm not a good builder myself, but I observe that connections within the world is kinda important. like I said I'm not a good builder and it's only based on my observations
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    Quote Originally Posted by ProdigyDawn View Post
    Heya! I'm not a good builder myself, but I observe that connections within the world is kinda important. like I said I'm not a good builder and it's only based on my observations
    What Do You Mean With "Connections"
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    First, Stop Capitalizing All Of Your Words Please. It Is Very Annoying To Read.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jedaki View Post
    First, Stop Capitalizing All Of Your Words Please. It Is Very Annoying To Read.
    okay... but you're capitalizing too
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    Quote Originally Posted by NOTSHOTS View Post
    okay... but you're capitalizing too
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    Can we just concentrate on the thread's topic?
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    Quote Originally Posted by NOTSHOTS View Post
    Can we just concentrate on the thread's topic?
    Of course. I believe that changing the blocks you use is not a good idea. In one part you're building with cliffs and then you changed the block you used half-way. You changed from jade spikes to bone spikes. Try to keep the general theme together.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jedaki View Post
    Of course. I believe that changing the blocks you use is not a good idea. In one part you're building with cliffs and then you changed the block you used half-way. You changed from jade spikes to bone spikes. Try to keep the general theme together.
    I didn't want to make it very simple
    But I'll try it thanks
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    you know, theres a lot of things to explain to type if worlds that it gets to a point where my feedback will be likely to become a laborious task to do.

    ill start off with the thickness of the terrain: now i see some common uses of using a thin terrain that can easily transition from 1 area to another that causes the view to look off from a camera perspective and a rendered perspective. now id suggest you only thicken some parts to make it look structured than a support.

    secondly, the uses of blocks: now there is not a lot of blocks that fits a certain terrain with modifications. of course paint does a lot of impact but it depends on the player itself. id suggest that you make sure the way your blocks blend wont look akwardly as it appears to transition to the another terrain unappealing. minor changes but avoid mixed blocks with more than 4 variations.

    i have a lot more but again, my feedback would be too complicated for you to process so i dropped off some crucial adjustments that will surely increase the atmosphere and view of your world as a wotd.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cahtster View Post
    you know, theres a lot of things to explain to type if worlds that it gets to a point where my feedback will be likely to become a laborious task to do.

    ill start off with the thickness of the terrain: now i see some common uses of using a thin terrain that can easily transition from 1 area to another that causes the view to look off from a camera perspective and a rendered perspective. now id suggest you only thicken some parts to make it look structured than a support.

    secondly, the uses of blocks: now there is not a lot of blocks that fits a certain terrain with modifications. of course paint does a lot of impact but it depends on the player itself. id suggest that you make sure the way your blocks blend wont look akwardly as it appears to transition to the another terrain unappealing. minor changes but avoid mixed blocks with more than 4 variations.

    i have a lot more but again, my feedback would be too complicated for you to process so i dropped off some crucial adjustments that will surely increase the atmosphere and view of your world as a wotd.
    Yeah the support in the cloud part is too thin I'll make it a little thicker.
    But for the variation of blocks i think it's too late
    I'll try to fix as much as I can.
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