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    Default WOTD tips for my main world plz

    So one of my friends brought up that with some tweaking and adjustments, I might be able to win WOTD. It’s currently under construction but I’ll leave the latest render I have down below. I’m a musician in Growtopia and this world is my music world. I’m wondering if the links to my music worlds will count against me if I were to submit it. I would also love any criticism or suggestions to make my world more interesting or functional since I’m a big amateur when it comes to world-building. Thanks. (Before someone mentions it, the world is deliberately off center by a block to allow for a fossil farm on the side) (Also, for some reason regal bannisters just turn into random crap when rendered so if there are some weird things placed, that’s why.)Name:  phaethon.png
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    Idk why it looks like a satanic tho but I think you should change the display block with another pixel art to increase your chances to win.

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    I mean, that’s quite impressive if you’re new to building. Only thing I can pinpoint rn is that the dark colors just blend together to much. Shouldve used some dark shade of gray for the main structure. Also that some types of blocks painted looks what I call drained. The original colors makes the red paint look bad. For example where you used red painted foliages. Not so visible on render but still
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    It's INCREDIBLE.

    Is that pixel art original?

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    Quote Originally Posted by UkyoKuonji View Post
    Idk why it looks like a satanic tho but I think you should change the display block with another pixel art to increase your chances to win.
    Which? The Minotaur one or the gold crest? If it’s the Minotaur then no-can-do. The whole world revolves around it. The crest can be replaced.

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    Quote Originally Posted by PHAETHON View Post
    Which? The Minotaur one or the gold crest? If it’s the Minotaur then no-can-do. The whole world revolves around it. The crest can be replaced.
    No i mean the display block on left side displaying stuff (antidote,chand,pickaxe) should be change to another pixel art. I dont think the display block necessary for Wotd . Anyways the world looks cool so you dont need to worry that much

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    Quote Originally Posted by Skullifer View Post
    It's INCREDIBLE.

    Is that pixel art original?
    Unfortunately it is not, but I’ve made a few modifications to the original. Trivial color palette changes though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by UkyoKuonji View Post
    No i mean the display block on left side displaying stuff (antidote,chand,pickaxe) should be change to another pixel art. I dont think the display block necessary for Wotd . Anyways the world looks cool so you dont need to worry that much
    Ohhhh, alright. Thanks so much!

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    Quote Originally Posted by PHAETHON View Post
    Unfortunately it is not, but I’ve made a few modifications to the original. Trivial color palette changes though.

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    Ohhhh, alright. Thanks so much!
    Ah. Looks good, nevertheless! I love the overall theme of the world

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    Looks pretty cool and kind of reminds me of Tk69's main world.
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    1 thing it lacks :
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    Quote Originally Posted by Scawt View Post
    1 thing it lacks :
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    Was thinking the same 😂 but I wonder if that’s too far
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    Your use of pixel art is pretty cool, usually I'd say that pixel art is bad, but it unites your world nicely. I agree with Anton that the world is a bit over-painted. You should try to add more contrast into your structures. Pillars used next to each-other could probably be substituted with another block. Overall, the design looks impressive.

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