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    Default Please rate my first adventure world!

    Storyline: A virus outbreak is spreading rapidly across the world. As a scientist, you know that the only way to stop the virus is to turn on the antivirus machine which is located in a top secret lab. But, will you be able to find it in time before everything is too late? Everyone is counting on you. Of course, you will be able to find it, whatever it takes...

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    Also please tell me how to improve the world.
    Thanks!
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    I think thats it pretty good but its too simple (for me atleast). Good Effort
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    ill have to play it when the servers are back up
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    Quote Originally Posted by Clarken (ciarken) View Post
    ill have to play it when the servers are back up
    Thanks if you can test it.
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    kinda empty, but seems nice
    I have no idea what I'm doing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NotSeedTopian View Post
    kinda empty, but seems nice
    I will try to fill the remaining empty spaces.
    But, what should I fill them with?
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    Quote Originally Posted by GTStorage View Post
    I will try to fill the remaining empty spaces.
    But, what should I fill them with?
    Clouds?

    idk
    I have no idea what I'm doing.

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    I'm not a good builder but here is my opinion:
    • add some trees, clouds because the main area looks too plain.
    • try to add more details to the cave area if possible.
    • change the doors into cave doors, try to add torch.
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    Quote Originally Posted by GTStorage View Post
    Storyline: A virus outbreak is spreading rapidly across the world. As a scientist, you know that the only way to stop the virus is to turn on the antivirus machine which is located in a top secret lab. But, will you be able to find it in time before everything is too late? Everyone is counting on you. Of course, you will be able to find it, whatever it takes...

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    Also please tell me how to improve the world.
    Thanks!
    Well it's not bad dude, but I'm sure you can do better. To be honest, your world seems to be good but it's lacking some detail, try adding some vines, paint and trees around to really make your world come to life!. Also, I would recomend filling up the empty areas with more parkour and making it a little tougher, so that it can't be completed in under five minutes! . Well, good luck winning!.
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    Thanks for sharing your opinions and advices everyone!
    I will try to improve the world.
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    World looks really cool but it lacks of details.
    Add more texture to the ground, like add some more grasses or bushes. Also I'd love to see more trees!
    In the bottom right room, the room that is made out of Grimstones. I suggest you to paint those Blue Portal with Green Paint, so it will fit with Grimstones.
    Also please add Cave Background behind the Dirt ground.
    I'll try the world when I can.
    Good luck!
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    Wow did you clear the entire surg blasted world by yourself?

    wow i admire your presistence
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