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    Interconnected world (DARASFATE2)

    Story:


    Overview:


    World Features:


    Features Used in Parkour:


    Feedback is appreciated and I will definitely make changes where needed. Also, doing /rate is appreciated.
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    Quote Originally Posted by tatertots View Post
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    Interconnected world (DARASFATE2)

    Story:


    Overview:


    World Features:


    Features Used in Parkour:


    Feedback is appreciated and I will definitely make changes where needed. Also, doing /rate is appreciated.
    Definitely a great effort in using colours! Good luck!
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    Storyline's pretty interesting I must say, interesting choice of music. It gives that chill, mellow vibes into it. I have to be honest, at first I didn't think I would like it, but I ended up did liking it. Parkour's pretty fun, sadly I cannot finish it as it is too hard for me. Art style's is quite good I have to say. parkour could be more noob friendly, but I don't mind a challenge. In my opinion you could make it more, what should I say this 'lively' on the parkour bit. Engaging the player more into the story I guess? I also I stumbled upon something I believe was a mistake.

    In the part where I have to get a torch in order to access an area, the checkpoint near where the 10 second parkour can be avoided by jumping pass it. This allows the player to get the torch quickly if they failed the 10 second parkour.

    Over all, good world, good story, good art style, good parkour. Could be improved a slight tiny bit, but the world is good as it is.

    Final rating: 4.3/5, and do not worry I gave the world rating 5.
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    Quote Originally Posted by loyalty View Post
    Storyline's pretty interesting I must say, interesting choice of music. It gives that chill, mellow vibes into it. I have to be honest, at first I didn't think I would like it, but I ended up did liking it. Parkour's pretty fun, sadly I cannot finish it as it is too hard for me. Art style's is quite good I have to say. parkour could be more noob friendly, but I don't mind a challenge. In my opinion you could make it more, what should I say this 'lively' on the parkour bit. Engaging the player more into the story I guess? I also I stumbled upon something I believe was a mistake.

    In the part where I have to get a torch in order to access an area, the checkpoint near where the 10 second parkour can be avoided by jumping pass it. This allows the player to get the torch quickly if they failed the 10 second parkour.

    Over all, good world, good story, good art style, good parkour. Could be improved a slight tiny bit, but the world is good as it is.

    Final rating: 4.3/5, and do not worry I gave the world rating 5.
    Thanks, i’ll look into the checkpoint issue

    edit: fixed, thank you!
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    wow a very nicely made world.
    (amazing cloud art!!)
    Good day kind sir,

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    Thank you, and you may scroll on.

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    updated the render
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